First Draft Review

My first draft had some good aspects and bad ones, which I need to fix on the next draft. I had successfully;

• Added in good text and content
• Had a good and spacious layout
• Got good clear pictures
• Kept with the house style

On my second edit, I need to work on;

• using thirds correctly
• adding in make up to my models photos
• using up negative space
• making my text clearer and bolder.