Second Draft Changes

From my second draft, there are still things that can be improved, but some things are near completion;

Good Points:

• The double page looks really professional and is pretty much finished
• The front cover image has been updated with a new photoshoot, and looks more professional and fits with the theme a bit more
• The contents page is more ordered

Improvements to be made:

• The contents page needs to be neatened up, and the editing picture changed
• The front text of bands needs to stick with house style and of one style
• There needs to be a barcode on the front page
• There needs to be a page number on the contents page